Recording the Narrator

I have asked my friend Cory to be the Narrator because I think he has a good, relatively deep story telling voice. We went into the Sound Booth at uni to record and it went really well. We got through most of the lines without problem but we had to change parts of the script to make it shorter so that it fit in the time frame and we changed a couple of words to make it sound more modern. I also decided to change the final line of the version we were using to include the details of how and why he tore himself in two.